Writing Task 2 Sample Essay- Public Health

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that expanding the number of leisure amenities is the most appropriate way of boosting the health of the general public, while others feel that this is not a viable solution and believe other steps are needed. This essay will argue that sports complexes are not the best answer and education is a more suitable option.

A greater availability of recreation facilities might help some become healthier but it is unlikely to have an effect on the unhealthy masses. Most health problems do not stem from a lack of opportunities, but from a lack of motivation. For example, Cambridge University found in a recent study that 62% of men and women who paid for an annual gym membership failed to go entirely after just one month.

A public awareness campaign about the dangers a sedentary lifestyle can have on one’s fitness, would affect not only people’s well-being but also their understanding of the issue. This is because most men and women are unaware of the harm they are doing to themselves by not exercising regularly and warning them about the risk factors would have a motivating effect. For instance, the ‘Go walking’ campaign in Northern Ireland in 2006 led to obesity related illnesses, like heart disease and stroke, falling by almost a quarter.

In conclusion, although an increased availability of sports centres can influence the wellness of the public to a certain extent, it is only through education that the real benefits can be realised.

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4 Comments

  1. sanba says

    Wow, I like your essay a lot. Impressive vocabulary and good ideas! Thank you.

  2. anasatfirst says

    I’m with you, but I meant that I learn from your website and look for new ideas here and there. So it could be some note I don’t know in typing those two sentences.

    Thank you

  3. Anas says

    Hello Chris,

    For below two sentences, why did you type comma before ‘but’ while you didn’t for the second?

    Most health problems do not stem from a lack of opportunities, but from a lack of motivation.

    …, would affect not only people’s well-being but also their understanding of the issue.

    Thanks
    Anas

    1. Christopher Pell says

      You are not going to lose marks for having one or two commas in the wrong place so don’t worry too much about this.

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